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Post by angie1379 on Nov 4, 2015 12:17:35 GMT -5
Here's a story I couldn't shake after it was revealed that Castle and Beckett's anniversary would be addressed in "The Last Seduction." It's not really speculation, since it's not necessary what I think will or even should happen. It's only one idea to tide us over and give us something to root for. I hope you enjoy. www.fanfiction.net/s/11597402/1/ |
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Post by tycho657 on Nov 4, 2015 13:29:54 GMT -5
It would be nice to see even half of this when they finally get back together. They must both be missing the contact by now...
Loved your story!
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Post by castlelover66 on Nov 4, 2015 20:03:48 GMT -5
Good story! Thanks!
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Post by marschg on Nov 5, 2015 1:17:49 GMT -5
Enjoyed it, thanks for posting
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Post by CastleFanGran on Nov 5, 2015 7:00:11 GMT -5
I enjoyed this story, Angie!!!
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Post by kman on Nov 5, 2015 9:34:23 GMT -5
Angie....this was really well written....It falls under the category of scenes we'd like to see.
I have got the feeling Ricky had a lot on his mind and really wanted to clear the air but Kate kept deflecting...he left, but I feel he left her a bit uneasy because she was told, under no circumstances, that this was not going to be tolerated for too much longer...so although she did what she thought was right, she knows she is on notice from her wounded husband...and he is wounded....you put into words so beautifully how much in love they are and how it is beginning to take its toll on the strained relationship.
I really enjoyed this story.....thanks for sharing.
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Post by nathanfan1 on Nov 5, 2015 12:00:46 GMT -5
Great story reflecting the perspective you shared, Angie!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 5, 2015 19:21:17 GMT -5
I'd read anything you'd write, Ang!
Nice job, lady!
If only.
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Post by angie1379 on Nov 5, 2015 22:18:55 GMT -5
Angie....this was really well written....It falls under the category of scenes we'd like to see. I have got the feeling Ricky had a lot on his mind and really wanted to clear the air but Kate kept deflecting...he left, but I feel he left her a bit uneasy because she was told, under no circumstances, that this was not going to be tolerated for too much longer...so although she did what she thought was right, she knows she is on notice from her wounded husband...and he is wounded....you put into words so beautifully how much in love they are and how it is beginning to take its toll on the strained relationship. I really enjoyed this story.....thanks for sharing. Thanks everyone! Writing is its own reward, for sure, but so is knowing people actually enjoy it! And kman, it's really interesting when people interpret things in ways you didn't necessarily intend or expect as the author. I was not deliberately trying to portray Kate as deflecting, but rather as trying to balance how much to tell Rick to satisfy his need (and right) to know, while still feeling like she is protecting him. But I can clearly see how you (or anyone) could read that as deflecting. It probably is! But yes, the ultimate point is that Kate is asking a lot from her husband, and he is doing his best to give her what she's asking for. But it's not easy, and to a large extent, it's not right or fair. But it's what we've got to work with, and I refuse to demonize either one of them for making tough choices out of love. I'm glad that seems to have come through in the story. |
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